Hi Jeffrey,
Thanks for sharing your video in the forum! I love seeing students take the initiative to track their progress and share their playing with the community—it’s such a great way to stay motivated and inspired.
To clarify, I don’t evaluate individual videos of students’ playing. That kind of feedback is best done with a private instructor who can work with you in real time, making small corrections and adjustments right there on the spot.
That said, I’d strongly recommend going through The Beginner’s Journey step by step if you haven’t already. It’s designed to guide you through essential skills in a clear, approachable way, and I think it would be incredibly helpful for you at this stage.
Keep up the great work, and feel free to reach out if you have any other questions or need direction!